Now what? I’m too impatient for the publishing world. Native Moments won’t be out until July 2017, so I know they have other books to work on before mine, but I’m ready now. I’ve decided to give it one more edit while I wait for the request from my editor. I’ve noticed some grammatical mistakes I do quiet bit. Here is an example:
“Sanch was standing in line.”
I’m changing these type of sentences to
“Sanch stood in line.”
I’m not sure why I used the word “was” so much. But I’ve went through and began highlighting them and couldn’t believe how many there were.
It’s a good exercise. Hopefully my editor will appreciate it.
Try it and let me know if it improves your writing.

I had the same problem with “which”:).
That mock-up of the cover looks good.
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